People Leonard Cohen

Poetry by hawk256, Nov 5, 2024.

  1. hawk256

    hawk256 Member

    People Leonard Cohen
    Lives now in heaven
    And there in heaven, he sleeps
    At night in his brass bed
    During the day Leonard Cohen
    Walk in God's gardens
    And he collects the apples from the apple trees
    And Leonard Gives the apples to God's servant
    And the servants make apple pie for Leonard's diner
    They know that apple pie is Leonard's favorite dessert
    After dinner, Leonard goes to bed
    He gets his 8 hours of sleep a day
    God loves Leonard
    And Leonard loves God
    Leonard has a good relationship with God
    People Leonard is safe in heaven
    Always remember that Leonard Cohen is not in pain anymore



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  2. Ardnei

    Ardnei Member

    :cool: is this really poetry?
     
  3. hawk2567

    hawk2567 Member

    Yes it is poetry
    Yes if you don't like that
    That is fine with me
    I know that you are entitle to your
    Opinion
    And I respect that
     
  4. Ardnei

    Ardnei Member

    Do you intentionally avoid rhyme and meter?
     
  5. hawk2567

    hawk2567 Member

    I hate poems that rhymes
    They are terrible
    I love free verse poetry
     
  6. Ardnei

    Ardnei Member

    for example, my poems :eek: